'Wonderland' Storyboard

Here is our estimated storyboard for our trailer 'Wonderland'. We've tried to incorporate every shot in the order it will appear in the trailer hopefully resulting in an order that doesnt involve too much sequential attributes, something that when presenting our idea was brought up.

See 'Wonderland Feeback with Mr Morris' for another look at what he had to say.

Above shows the first 8 scenes of our film trailer 'Wonderland'. It demonstartes on a number of scenes, giving away no obvious plot to the audience.

Out of all the storyboard sheets, these 8 scenes shows the most sequential order with 4/8 shots within this coming from one scene.

As you can see these shots focus on Rob and his time in the drug den.

These scenes shows Rob and Alice in 'Wonderland'.

The last few shots focus on the build up to the end, showing Rob in a desperate trance with the film finally ending by the closing of a door.

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'Wonderland' Script

Here is our potential script for our film 'Wonderland'.

Will= Rob
Elle= Alice
Green screen. Age rating of trailer.

1.Elle and Will going out.
Walking along holding hands.
Will: So, what are you doing tomorrow night?
Elle: I hope you haven’t forgotten it’s our anniversary.
Will: Don’t worry, I’ve got everything planned. Just don’t stand me up.
Fade

2.Phone call, car headlights.
Will standing outside restaurant, looking at the time on his phone, then calls Elle.
Will: Where are you?
Elle: I’m just running late, I should be there soon
Elle walks out into the road.
Head lights appear, camera fades, hear car brakes, phone cuts off.

3.Funeral.
Will walking out of a graveyard in a suit.

4.Meeting the drug dealer.
Tyler leaning against a wall in an alleyway.
Will walks past and Tyler stops him.
Tyler: Alright Rob? What you up to?
(No reply from Will)
Tyler: Do you want to buy some gear?
(No reply.)
Tyler: Come with me, we’ll have a chat.

5.Going to ‘wonderland’.
P.O.V. shot showing Will walking into Wonderland apartment.
Looking into rooms of drug addicts.
Passed out in Jesus position.
Drug addict rocking in a room.


6.Taking a hit.
Will takes a shot of heroin.
Wonderland apartment turns into wonderland forest.

7.Wonderland forest.
Will sees silhouette of Elle in wonderland.

8.Establish the cast.
Will Derry – Reality (running into shot, looking through stolen wallet).
Elle Rossiter – Reality (looking in the mirror, getting ready for night out).
Tyler Andrews – Reality (snorts cocaine then looks up at camera)

8.Mugging scene.
Mikey walking along.
Will walking opposite way.
Will pushing Mikey into a wall and get out a knife.
Will: Give me your money.
Mikey: Get off me!
Close up of knife.
Will stabs Mikey.

9.Will and Elle talking in wonderland forest.
Elle: Why are you here?
Will: I had to come see you.
Elle: You shouldn’t have come. (Blood starts dripping from her mouth)
Elle steps back.
The sound of the car break is heard.
Will turns around, there’s nothing there.
Will looks back at Elle.
Elle is in the same clothes the night she was hit.
Elle’s clothes are torn with bloodstains with blood dripping from her mouth. Mangled

10.Dramatic argument between Tyler and Will.
In wonderland, the apartment.
Tyler: sorry, I cant let you in
Will: no you have to, I need to get I there
Tyler: I should never of started you on this, just get out now while you still can.
Will: Its to late now, let me in !
(scuffle ensues )

Will sitting in wonderland apartment alone.Will standing in wonderland forest (raining) alone.

Title of the film.

Credits.
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'Wonderland' Feeback with Mr Morris

After presenting our 'Wonderland' presentation we asked our Media teacher Mr Morris for some feedback on aspects surrounding the plot.
From his feedback we can try and take potential weak spots to the trailer and manouvre them into positives hopefully resulting in success for the trailer.

Link to Presentation:
http://mikefentonmedia.blogspot.com/2011/10/wonderland-presentation-view-more.html

Saving Private Ryan Trailer Analysis

 

Saving Private Ryan is to many, one of the greatest war films ever made. It’s in detail look of how the Normandy landings happened left the audience captivated and shocked by its realism.

The Normandy landings scene lasts 27 minutes and demonstrates a real in-depth look to how its really happened. Its use of camera angles and movement allowed the audience to feel like they were really within the film and acting as one of the soldiers. This camera work didn’t just last throughout this 27 minutes but all the way through the film, allowing the audience to feel connected with the characters throughout.

Here is a image of a good camera shot

Below is trailer analysis of Saving Private Ryan;

Filming Schedule

Here is our estimated film schedule for our trailer wonderland. Weve tried to split our scenes up into seperate shots allowing us to set a certain date for each shot. With some scenes there are very similiar shots and stuff we can do quickly and relatively easily. With this in mind you will see certain dates coming up 3 or 4 times explaining that we aim to do more than 1 shot per day of filming.

The start date of filming is Saturday October 15th and we aim to finish filming and start editing around early Decemeber. We understand that some of these dates people will be away and filming wont be able to commend. Taking this into account, we have incorporated a contigency time to allow us to finish filming certain scenes and be ready for editing.

Wonderland Presentation

Wonderland presentation

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Here is our presentation for our film trailer 'Wonderland'. Within the presentation we have tried to touch on a number of different features and aspects that will be involved throughout the entire process.
Planning our trailer early allowed us to get some feedback from our peers and see whether they feel that this is achievable.